Nothing

A Poem by Alanna

A gentle breeze

stirs the weightless air.

I look down

feet balanced

on a gossamer thread

below that

nothing.

One tiny filament

stretched taut

by some invisible force

is all that stands

between me

and nothing.

Soundlessly

it snaps

and I feel

nothing.

© 2013 Alanna

Author's Note

Any criticism welcome, please! I'm pretty new at this still.

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Added on May 3, 2013
Last Updated on May 3, 2013

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Alanna

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I've always loved reading, but I've never liked sharing my writing with other people. I'd really like to improve my writing so constructive criticism and feedback is more than welcome! more..