Watching From The Seat

This came from one of my dreams, it really means a lot to me.

Real or not, I was there, in a school bus,

full of people, classmates.

Having fun, talking, relaxing, just chilling,

on comfortable seats.

Not so much light, the essential.

There was a group on the right,

nearby me, I was looking at them,

and that's when I felt alone.

You were sorrounded by funny, handsome boys,

you were laughing with them.

It seemed like you felt at ease,

so much more than me.

Jealous or not, I was still watching you,

from this seat.

And then I felt empty.

Was that you?

Author's Note

This is simplest poem of all time regarding the grammar, I'm sure I'm going to improve myself on writing. I just wanted to express my feelings on this very short dream I had and that's it. Let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

It does seem like a dream, you started it beautifully with a bit of description about the setting of your dream.... Simple, clear and it sounds raw and very innocent with a mystery of the last question to solve... This is a thought provoking write....

Keep on writing my frnd, poetry world awaits for you...

Regards
Dhiman