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The day they stole everything, I never saw their face, I fear cos I dunno what they look like.

Why are you been too protective?

 You lock your doors but you still don't trust the keys

Why are you been too protective?

 You sleep with two or more persons and still think someone might snick in without one of you noticing

I am over protective cos

Once the lock and doors were breached and I was with my keys

 I am over protective cos

Soft drowsiness was my senses when she was stolen from me.

Reviews

[Brad Dehler]

INteresting. Is this about someone or about people in general? Too protective and not trusting the keys is interesting. The keys considered, not the lock. She was stolen from you... Wow a powerful and gut wrenching conclusion. The beginning seems to be cynical and something you had to learn the hard way.

[emmajoygreen]

You've created a romantic mystery, riddled with pathos.. so very sad. Is as if you're trying to find the right path, sir.

[Davidgeo]

"you lock the doors but you don't trust the keys"

That's beautiful insight into the human condition.

[Mary Helda]

well my dear i thought you were terribly beaten up and robbed or something turns out it is just a girl, very very nice, love it

[Valentine]

Here I thought you were robbed. Valentine

[Anindita Janhabee]

quite interesting... and thinkable...
cause something always being protective hold the real mystery ...
umm...good yet it'd be better if you would have added some more lines to get a clear picture of the writing....
but overall, it was alright... nice depth of thoughts...
Anindita : )