Can't Save Me

Everyday and all day long
I wonder where I went wrong
In which phase of my life
I deserved to be dead but alive
Lost, my dreams drown
Goals of me are already set
Long time ago, but never met
None, my passion faded
My sparkling ambition gone
Dying & nothing can save me
I keep saying maybe tomorrow
But Hope surrenders not my sorrow
Nothing left for me to survive
In Every next chapter of life
I await hope to arrive
Maybe tomorrow if not today
A zillion lies faking my soul to stay
If I shall write something or say
“Nothing” justify it a fine way

Reviews

[Rhayne]

We all have days that we think our whole life has been nothing but a mistake made. It's easy to forget those days that we were happy and everything seemed perfect. There's always hope, if not in this life, maybe the next?

[For Mariposa]

Actually all of the poems you read are 5 years or older, now my feelings are blank, I can't write anymore as I dont feel anything to write about, I posted them here so maybe I can get back my ability to write, or at least read some poems of writers here to encourage me come back!
yes maybe in next life we meet our lost loves and they forgive us, and maybe we get surrounded by all our loved ones and live joyfully together, hope so!

[Rhayne]

It'll come, give it time. Don't concentrate on it. Pick a subject that's not about you or what you feel. If you dream and can remember them, use them, I do. One of my own favs is Dhaval: Prince of Warriors. That came entirely from a dream. Dhaval was a friend of mine who lives in India. I've never met him in person. We used to role play online and for some reason, I dreamed of him and it became a short story.