like one, two?

good luck perished time,

you'll be silver like a bullet,

and you'll gonna have my blessing.

but before I just continue

try to notice beautiful sky,

- what are you really able to buy?

and everything is better

when you colide two cold feathers.

so go and slowly die,

take your wings and fly,

listen greenish lullaby,

nothing is lower then high.

Reviews

[SarahLin]

Thank you for sharing .....

[isus]

thank you for reading :D

[Great Aunt Astri]

I liked this slightly obscure poem. It leads to using your imagination. I imagine the man is telling time that is has permission to die. I imagine that 'perished time' can be composted .. 'listen greenish lullaby.'

[isus]

i'm glad you like it :D i don't know how i read this now, and it was 3 week ago.. i love to make you use imagination and that is what my poems mostly do, i love freedom of interpretation and how we all can see diferent things in same words

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, it is funny how different people interpretate poems differently!