Enchanted lake of Outskirt

Why did we go so far,

why did we try so hard?

And laughing too much

devil gives us another look,

he dares us with touch,

such a lovely hook!

Instead of enlightening,

shining mock of brilliance

pouring on us something

that we can't define.

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Well Isus, the say that the devil has the best tunes! And also, are we all really better off if we are enlightened? Loved your poem

[isus]

we might not be better but we would probably be different :) thank you, i'm glad you like it :D

[Sami Khalil]

"devil gives us another look,

he dares us with touch,

such a lovely hook!

Instead of enlightening,

shining mock of brilliance

pouring on us something

that we can't define."
I agree. It is a chilling write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[isus]

no my friend, thank you for reading :) i'm glad you like it

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You are welcome...:)

[rankoranko]

What a great poem man, it gives me chills, I think I'm fallin in love with your poetry!!

[isus]

i'm really glad you like it :D thanks