don't make it habit

Hear your words in thoughts,

on sunlight you put them,

or just try to lure them.

Listen, you won't end,

for you is the other,

you will only blend.

Shine my steady line,

for best season countdown,

for excelent world!

Reviews

[Pam]

It gave me a sense of happiness. Love it!

[isus]

im so glad! :D

[MandaBear]

very unique my friend =3 i like it

[isus]

thank you :D glad you like it

[Tam Warink]

Refreshingly terse and relevant; efficient emotive propels the message.

[isus]

thank you :)

[Relic]

Hmm, I don't really get it myself.

[isus]

it's ok :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

The first line sticks out. Inner thoughts put into words is how I took it. Some are sunny and some are just hooks to lure others. I could be wrong. It took me a few times to read it, but that is personally what I got from it. xoWinter

[isus]

if you got it like that, it's correct :)

[TL Boehm]

putting words on sunlight. Thats lovely

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Tiffany Boles]

I like it. Very creative and lively. Nice write.

[isus]

thank you Tiffany

[Rita L. Sev]

Some good thoughts here, though I am pondering how to tie them together...

[isus]

thank you Rita :) don't ponder too much. it could be first thing you see.

[Angel]

Sorry, Isus, I don't understand this one at all. It reads like disjointed, random thoughts...

[isus]

i'm glad you say that. this piece can be hard to understand if you don't know that it is just everything you see (or feel) in every line you read. :) it is completely yours to interpret.

[burnhouse]

Oh, lijepo je, sviđa mi se. :)

[isus]

ja mislio da tebe ovdje više nema :D tnx

[burnhouse]

Dođem tu i tamo. Škola, ahah.

[isus]

i ja bi rado u školu aaaaa

[burnhouse]

Nije prezabavno. :P

[isus]

ma meni je bilo i previše :D stvori si zabavu sama, drogiraj se, nemoj ić na nastavu, imaj dobre ocjene i to ti je to :D (mislim na lake droge, nemoj sad umrt :D )

[burnhouse]

Bahahaha, najneobičniji savjet. :') I k tome od Isusa. :P

[isus]

just think what would jesus do :D