don't make it habit

Hear your words in thoughts,

on sunlight you put them,

or just try to lure them.

Listen, you won't end,

for you is the other,

you will only blend.

Shine my steady line,

for best season countdown,

for excelent world!

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

It sounds like you are writing about creating poetry.

[isus]

love your interpretation

[Baby Ricochet]

Heh??.....................................................

[isus]

yeah, thats the right comment :D

[Diana]

Interesting. One is part of the other...

[isus]

it is? :D

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Hear your words in thoughts- rite there is a beauty! Shine my steady line- your words speak my friend! Awesome now run with that always!

[isus]

Thank you my friend, you help me a lot. I really appreciate it.

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Your welcome glad I could be there,thats what friends are for:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Some great thoughts, here. Thank you, Isus.

[isus]

thank you :)