Floating down the sound resounds around the icy waters underground

Oh man, I'm red shifted,

and it feels ok,

but what's to do when light is gone,

and my legs are all stretched and long?

The light is gone

but just for me,

you can still see shimmers,

I'm beyond event horizon,

astroman and rivers.

Reviews

[Angel]

I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this...
Very creative and definitely unique piece!

[isus]

hope it was worth reading :)

[MandaBear]

I like the title very catchy! Great poem too. Nice job!

[isus]

thanx, glad you like it :)