Oh when the sun beat down upon my face

A Poem by isus

again by Keva and me.

Oh what a beautiful day

In April street

And just by the corner is a

Bicycle shop

Where I'm buying bike

Right now.

So I'm gonna take a ride

under the Sun

in April street

boy, that's gonna be a trip!

Ain't that just swell

Riding my new bicycle

Here, on this sunny day

In April street

© 2014 isus

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MandaClarine

so happy! I loved it, well done

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

glad to know you like it :)

Anusha Prabhu

Simple... Apt!! N all it can be for what its worth! Loved it ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

hey, thanx for stoping by :)

HeazerH

I like this poem because it is refreshing. Thanks for writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

no, thank you for reading :)

Baby Ricochet

Spring is a beautiful thing

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

it really is Ric :D

Mercury Rising

Reminds me of a combination of the Queen songs 'Seaside Rendezvous' and 'Bicycle'. Cool...

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

oh always nice to see someone listen great music!

gabrielle

You vividly painted a bright carefree summer days. A very positive write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thanx for stoping by

Frieda P

Like a sunny smile on your page. Now if it would just stop raining, we could ride. :-)

Sound be 'a' bike.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

well spoken :)

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Ill have to say yes because I am a road cyclist, I remember my 1st time buying my dream bike it was second hand but like new:) 2007 Salsa It cost 1,199 dollars I have a bit more in it as well. People flip out when I tell them what it cost me. Some bikes are ten thousand or better. But its a lot different from the ole Huffy back in the day, I have got this bike up to 55mph riding down hill, you have to pedal or you get took off the road in a hurry, I know some guys have done 65 mph and that's a rush! Bike weighs less than 10lbs