Correlated

by my friend Vinko and i

Yes! There is a lovely bud under my sweet, sweet pillow, colored as a greyest mud. -And runs ahead a raving beast, stoner-chasing armadillo, straight from the east. You know what I know, but some things I don't know you appear to know. Is punk in your eyes suddenly fading, are you a smiling pacifist now, punk shall be pervading, but peace should be there for all.

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

Interesting poem, isus.. all four stanzas seem to be stand-alones, none of them seem to fit with the others. Shuffled and correlated indeed.

[isus]

writers of this was very high at the moment. it's just result of i don't know, lack of ideas maybe

[Ravyne Hawke]

the title fits well then =)

[isus]

atleast something :)

[Rachelle]

Isus, this is going to take some time for me to figure out.

[isus]

take all the time you need

[Rachelle]

an armadillo… eh… all i can think about is roadkill…. sorry….

[isus]

all i can think about is heroe

[Baby Ricochet]

Armadillos run straight for the brush

[isus]

armadillos with talking powers :D