Glagolitic insemination

Immortal bunch of idiots,

between things between thoughts-

sanctuary worth of leaving.

on the narrow desert edge.

life is worthless with a pledge

you gave to inner deamon

that inseminated god

And now I disappear you reappear,

using shadows to burn minds in fear,

not knowing I'll occur again

to obliterate all power gained

in illusion casted backwards

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

I don't know what the fug this means specifically, I was thinking about it and then I read the other reviews... an emptiness came over me.

hahahahahha, it reads nice.

Normally I wouldn't comment without a better grasp but, the reviews... ah, they say so much nothing... this place is kind of retarded sometimes.

(untransperance? "i like the last two lines".... ha... hahha... NOTHING!!!)(empty)

[isus]

for that reason i don't review a lot cause i don't know what to say, i don't know how to analize piece in some meaningfull way, i can only read it and interpretate it for myself. and there's people trying to find meaning in lots of my stuff but they can't find it cause there's no meaning, just freedom of interpretation.

[Davidgeo]

more nothing... you just said absolutely nothing to me.

[Davidgeo]

I don't hold this against you... artfully saying nothing is a sign of talent.

[isus]

then that talent must be nothing :D

[Davidgeo]

Everything was at once nothing... find the something for your nothing... bit of light in the darkness. Drugs are a worthy alternative... less destructive.

[Davidgeo]

I just said nothing

[isus]

yeah, but then everything said is nothing, like it is.

[Davidgeo]

What do you call a herd of masturbating cattle?

[isus]

how ?

[Davidgeo]

(he meant to say "What? What do you call them HansJizzy?" and to that I would say, why, Beef Stroganoff of course... Hee f*****g Haw... I'm so god damn funny.

[isus]

i don't know why am i laughing when i dont even understand haha

[Davidgeo]

That's high praise... off this assessment I declare this will be how we make first contact with aliens from now until, Aliens.... the reboot

[isus]

maybe lsd or other psychedelic drugs would change that :p

[Davidgeo]

Comrade.... morate nauciti druge jezike.

[isus]

izgleda...

[Winslow Des Totes]

Wow. Very powerful use of diction and syntax here! Nice job!

[isus]

thanx :)

[Davidgeo]

He has a very powerful dick.son

[Davidgeo]

diction... I meant diction.. sorry it was a fugging typo.

[Winslow Des Totes]

Lol that's alright I got a good chuckle out of it! But yes I agree :)

[V]

There's a certain kind of untransparence about it but for the most part an interesting read. Somehow I like the first and last two lines the most, they work as a sort of frame for my understanding.

[isus]

tnx Vanessa :)