Luck of the Draw

I sit here,

Deep in thought.

How much more luck could I have?

Blessed with so many things

My talents

And the people around me

Some people

Walk miles for water

I walk to the kitchen

Other just don't have a home

I have 2

Some have only 1 parent

And I have 3

How much more could I have?

Already gifted with so many things

The ability to write

Yet, the right to write as I please

I really shouldn't complain

I should look at my life

And be happy

I mean

How lucky could I be?

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Joe Walsh "I can't complain but some times I still do" If the time is there ,you might like my letter Dear Court

[~Lizzy♬]

I love this poem. It was so well written. You make a very good point in this poem and it's very realistic. Wonderful write. :)

~Lizzard~

[Daydreamer54]

This is sop true. We complain,but really we are better off than some people. we should start being greatful for what we have! great write! ^^

[Prudence MacLeod]

I like this, the movement is smooth, the message clear, and the author quite self aware.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

An excellent poem, very good as to how you see things, top poem and its message :)

[deleted]

Everyone should realise this, glad there is someone out there that does. Now we just need to spread it. Loud and Clear.
Nice one. I'm still mindblown at how fast you write these poems, seriously S-S, care to share? :P