The Life Inside

The Life Inside

A Poem by Jules
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I think too much...

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The life inside

Imperative
Immediate, solitary
 
And yet I’m not alone
 
Existence in the world
Exhausting and painful
Bravery required
 
And belief in hope
 
The vessel of this body
A nuisance
Necessary
 
Not evil, but it hurts
 
Does the aching
Make me “real”
Or is it the other way around?
 
I’ll never truly know

© 2008 Jules


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The pondering s and inquiring s of mind, then at the end it becomes quiescence with 'I don't know '. I like the way it collects, a yearning of wondering 's and then settles almost in a resigned sigh at the end.

Posted 17 Years Ago


you know don't me or my situation but this really resonates with me.

nice little snippets that together put forth such an honest and human write.

i too wonder sometimes if hurt validates reality or if reality by it's nature must include these things.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jules
Jules

Englewood, CO