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Why does the burden

Get heavier when shared?

It’s clear you don’t comprehend

Clearer still you do not care

 

Why does your touch sear

Hurting more than you, turned away?

I’d rather you ignore me

Than with your false words, slay

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[Violeta]

a bit sentimental, but its true. It gets heavier 'cause you are carring you'r and his(her) problems and faults, if the other person does not care, it crushes you.

"Than with your false words, slay" I like that phrase, I have felt that way. You really are good at transmiting feelings through your work. Nice job