in her eyes

a lake full of fire and ice.

i saw a lake in her eyes
blue, torn by two rivers
the first, a burning fire raged
of aggravation, irritablity
dangerously dancing.
the river, boiled
heated by hate
the rejection of the world
the second, was a frozen tundra
the secluded  wind howling, mourning
hides her tears in the black sky

 

i offered to her:
a simple act of kindness
a tissue

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like this very much ... its a very good write

[Dai (Pronounced Dye)]

I really liked this poem because I could picture in my head so vividly almost like a most scene playing back to me. I thought it was well written and definitely on my top list of poems I've read today.