hiaku 1 (wonderland roses) hiaku 2 (erosion)

my first attemt at a haiku poem... Not so good... But its a two for one sale...my second attempt much more serious lol

woonderland roses

roses are painted red

but they are really white

wonderland is odd

 

erosion

where does sand come from?

seashells grinding together.

time does this to all

Reviews

[Jeff Timpa]

Nice job with #2 Erosion. You have captured the concept with imagery and concise language. Your subject matter fits nicely within the form. Well done. #LRWP2018

Nice first attempt at haiku style poems! Interesting.

[Kristen]

The second haiku is my favorite of the two, both are quite clever though! Nice work!

- S.T.