bound to you

girl you nestled up next to me

hiding from the world from under these sheets

oh, baby open your eyes, please

nothings more exotic than those emerald greens

your scent is a tropical forest

i'm so lost and i dont want to be found

your hands on mine, im so bound

bound to your voice

so bound its not even a choice

bound from head to toe

so bound i wanna take you nice and slow

bound to your heart

so bound i need your consent to touch that part

bound to you

you bring a smile to my face, lying next to you

Reviews

[bubbles]

i agree with Senseless whatever, the tempo could do with that tweak. this poem paints such a lovely scene to have that kind of connection with someone would be awesome

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. I would suggest dropping the 'so' from every other line for tempo. Just a suggestion.

[BrokenStaR]

keep on bounding... :D
keep it up.. :)