smile

still new at hiaku. after the spring break im in a happy mood so i decided to describe and philosify on smiling.

when a person smiles

it shines, bending for light.

adapting to life.

Author's Note

kinda wish bright and light wouldn't rhyme in this... well what do you think? i like the concept. do you? i wuv revewers lol.

Reviews

[Nameless]

gj

[Senseless whatever]

This is good. Maybe change, 'it is bright' to 'it shines' or something similar to avoid the rhyme.

[BrokenStaR]

its short... but concise... :)