Poem of Nonsense

LOL made this one while watching some stupid movie:p

  Poem of Nonsense

Don’t let your belly jiggle for you will surly giggle.

Snuggle with a puddle and you will surely sneeze.

Try not to sneeze for you will only sneeze cheese.

These things which I have told you will surely make you snap.

Slap the snapper with some clippers for the crowd will surely clap.

If you hold a cat on your lap the crowd will be happy.

But the crowd will only be happy if there is no bird named flappy.

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

Yes, this is definately poetry! Great job:)

[iveltac]

thinks. Its random:p.

[Cool Girl]

Yes, very random. Which is totally your style:) You're welcome!

[iveltac]

:p its about time someone knows me. my mom says i dance like peter quil and all my friends think i write the weirdest things. :p and i am akward.

[Cool Girl]

Awkward people are cool! All the weird people are normal and all the ones who arnt normal are weird.

[iveltac]

:p i know i am not normal which is personaly awsome :p

[Cool Girl]

Very very true.... I will never be normal!

[iveltac]

:p whowants to be normal?

[Cool Girl]

Umm...boring peple?

[iveltac]

:p who wants to be boring?

[Cool Girl]

Umm...nobody?

[iveltac]

lol than why are they boring. :p

[Cool Girl]

idk? You're boring, the world is boring, I'm boring! Happy with that answer?

[iveltac]

:p sure if i boring then weird is normal.

[Cool Girl]

.... 😋 eh

[iveltac]

.... :p whats so ehhh

[Cool Girl]

YOU!!!!!! hahahahahahahahahahahha

[iveltac]

:p thats what they all say. Rolf

[Cool Girl]

:P lol ....

[iveltac]

Roll on Laughing Floor

[DoormanDan]

I had a feeling this poem was going to make me smile, and then it made me LAUGH. That last line is just perfect. Good job! Sometimes the world just needs a little nonsense :)

[iveltac]

Thank you Doormandan for reviewing it. And i am glad you liked it. and yes somtimes nonsense is needed to let us chill and relax. if there is anything u need me to review just tell me.

[DoormanDan]

Thanks. Could you review my children of stardust story(it's split into 2 parts) and tell me what you think? I'm trying to find out how I can improve my storywriting skills.

[iveltac]

Yes i will when i have the time. Can u request it?

[iveltac]

and doorman yes i will try and read it and tell you what you can improve on your story writing.

[DoormanDan]

Thanks Iveltac :)

[Lizardo]

Wow, the name of the poem says it all, but still I like it
Good work

[iveltac]

:p who doesnt like a little bit of stupid here and there. thanks for the review.