The beach

The Beach

 The beach is very neat as long as you wear cleats.

The beach may be beautiful but it is also colorful.

The beach is very colorful and looks simple wonderful.

People go to the beach for fun when there is a great big sun.

The heat that is on the beach really likes to pick on feet.

The moon is coming soon and it is way past noon.

I am afraid that it is time to go back home.

Even if we have to go home alone.

Reviews

[Lizardo]

A Wonderful poem to the beach, I really like this
Good work! keep it up!

[iveltac]

thank you for taking the time to review. Your review is much aprreciated.

[Dannyisawriter]

I really liked this because I love the beach :) It makes me want to go right now even though it's freezing outside LOL

[iveltac]

lol yeah. Maybe you might want to jump in the swimming pool. "jump". Smack oww :p thanks for reviewing.

[misha]

An interesting poem. Rare to find poems in paragraph form. Great job!

[iveltac]

thank you for taking the time to review my item. I dont know much about poetry so i just write it like a short story:p Just making the words rhyme. Im a poet and i didnt even know it. lol