Death

Death

Death is like bad breath.

It is not pleasant and is simply strange.

It smells sourer like a peanut.

But peanuts taste like tree nuts.

Tree nuts are gross like a nose.

Death is compared to a stinky nose that is stuck in a hose.

The hose then poses for a photo which then slows.

Death is deadly like a medley.

It can stab you several times and you hurt like scabs.

Death is horrible simply unstorible.

Reviews

[luvs2write]

Death smells like peanuts?? You have offended Mr. Planter!!! Poor guy...he's pulling his top hat over his face now. He is self concious of his bad breath... And the posing hose is trying to choke up the nose, but it's really stuck in there good.

[iveltac]

lol thinks luvs for the review.

[luvs2write]

Always my pleasure, Ivy. =P

[iveltac]

lol ok Luvs. Humm i think i need a diaper. :PPPP :d

[luvs2write]

haha very funny....POISON ivy!!!!

[iveltac]

Yepp im a posion to those who are around me. AHHHH IM A ZOMB

[luvs2write]

Well, I'm a vampire...so we can be friends =)

[iveltac]

lol that is nice.

[luvs2write]

Yes...it is nice. It's also unfortunate though, because since you are already dead I can't suck your blood.

[Cool Girl]

I like it! You should write a story where death is the narrarator! Sorry for all my suggestions :P

[iveltac]

ill make death the narrator on the story about the moon vs sun for you. :p

[Cool Girl]

Aww, that's so sweet of you!

[iveltac]

:p thats what all the ladys think. Rolf

[Cool Girl]

lol that made me laugh really hard..

[iveltac]

oh boy :p ok lol