Sunlight

Sunlight

Oh sunlight oh sunlight where are you.

At night you hide behind the moon and all day you hide behind clouds.

One day I hope to see you brightly shining in the sky.

Completely adorned by all life. Oh star light oh starlight I see you now.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

nice work cos i wrote a poem about oh moonlight years ago. a great enjoyable read. short but sweet

[iveltac]

Thank you for reviewing. Im glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Nothing more wonderful than the sun. I liked how you described the sunlight and the need to be adored by her. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iveltac]

Thank you Coyote for taking the time to review it. Much appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Jamestown]

This is very cute, made me smile! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[iveltac]

Thank you for reviewing.

[closed]

this is pretty good too
you have a quaint, aloof style that works well


-Dream

[iveltac]

Thanks. What i thought weird about this though is that it doesnt rhyme.

[Cool Girl]

Poetry doesn't need to rhyme!
Thank God because I can't rhyme lol

[iveltac]

But it must rhmye. I love making it rhyme. Without rhyme it has no meaning. Lol

[Cool Girl]

Umm..
My poetry doesn't rhyme!
And I do think it has meaning xD

[iveltac]

Lol dont take it the wrong way what i was trying to say was mine doesnt make since if it doesnt rhyme.

[Cool Girl]

Lol
I know..
I was just messin with you xD

[iveltac]

lol.............

[Cool Girl]

You're crazy!

[iveltac]

Tadaaaa...

[Cool Girl]

You are an evil wizard from a faraway land!

[Cool Girl]

This is actually not weird...to my surprise. Where's the real Iveltac and what did you do with him? jk jk
I love this! Nice job:)

[iveltac]

lol i should have added a ninja dagnabit. :p

[Cool Girl]

dang muffins! You really should have!

[iveltac]

ok ill edit it. :p