Superman

Superman

Superman is super and duper.

He has no bloopers and is definitely not a mini cupper.

He fly’s through the air with the greatest of ease until he meets a good winter breeze.

It then freezes him and makes him sneeze.

When he sneezes the world gets the mizzles.

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

I'm glad you clarified that superman isn't a mini cooper, I wasn't too sure about that for the longest time. This made me smile a little, which is just what I needed. Good job :)

[iveltac]

Thanks Dan.

[Willard Wells]

A little goofy and fun. nice job. Keep it up.

[iveltac]

Thank you for reviewing Willard.

[Heartful5160]

Great write!!! I love the rhythm of the poem and how it all flows together!!!! And please check,out my work as well thank you and keep writing!!!!

[iveltac]

Thank you for reviewing Heart. I will go loook at your work.

[Heartful5160]

Thank you so much. And your welcome.

[Cool Girl]

This is actually hilarious! Wait, did superman just sneeze? Because I think I got the mizzles lol JK

[iveltac]

:p Thanks CG.

[Perkele.7885]

I am sure that this appeals to a lot of the readers out there in our poets community. I myself thought it was cute but, I have personal issues dealing with silliness. Please excuse my lukewarm review!

[iveltac]

Thats fine perk. Thanks for taking the time to review anyways.

[Tom McRoberts]

Really fun and whimsical, not afraid to be silly, like a good old Superman comic from the 50s or 60s. Keep it up!

[iveltac]

Thank you Tom for reviewing it. Im glad you liked it.

[Zabella]

mizzles? hehe! I love that word!!

[iveltac]

lol yeah comes in handy.

[wordman]

when he sneezed he went back in time now he`s clark kent trying to meet a deadline lol

[iveltac]

Lol makes since. :p hey word man you should join us down at the bottom of this page. Were trying to get a 1 k comment thing done.

[wordman]

well send details

[iveltac]

ok so far over the past week we have gotten over 400 comments done down there. So Luvs2write reviewed this peice and then it turned into a giant conversational peice. Were just talking about random stuff.

[wordman]

sounds like fun

[iveltac]

lol ok well when you want to join just go to the very first review on this story and tada your there.

[A. H. Pinley]

Nice flow of words! Checkout Crash Test Dummies song, "The Superman Song".

[iveltac]

Glad you liked it.

[dan]

For musical accompaniment I'd prefer 3 Doors Down's "Kryptonite." super

[Fallen Phoenix]

Hehe loved the randomness of this! Made me smile!

[iveltac]

Thank you for reviewing it fallen.