Superman

Superman

A Poem by iveltac

Superman


Superman is super and duper.


He has no bloopers and is definitely not a mini cupper.


He fly’s through the air with the greatest of ease until he meets a good winter breeze.


It then freezes him and makes him sneeze.


When he sneezes the world gets the mizzles.

© 2015 iveltac


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This piece is super dooper. Its hilarious love it.


Posted 10 Years Ago


iveltac

10 Years Ago

Thanks Kristan.
A fun write. I bet you were smiling ALL the way.
Thank you for sharing your wit and charm.
Nice!

Posted 10 Years Ago


iveltac

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing.
random... I like it. hahaha:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


iveltac

10 Years Ago

Totaly agree with you.
Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

I don't know what is the purpose of it, sometimes I only want to say: thanks. sometimes one word say.. read more
iveltac

10 Years Ago

Same here.
lol i really liked this. great job. ill never see superman the same again

Posted 10 Years Ago


iveltac

10 Years Ago

:p thanks. im glad you liked it. I thought it was one of the worst of my poems. Didn't put much time.. read more
this was fun
lol


I like the randomness of it


-Dream

Posted 10 Years Ago


iveltac

10 Years Ago

Lol randomness is what i do best.
this made me laugh soo hard lol, we srsly need more content like this on here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


iveltac

10 Years Ago

;p thanks Kaif. I love it when people laugh at my stuff. Thats what i write it for to make people la.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

Superman or better said stupidman hits me in the stomach... I look at him like nothing happened... T.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

10 Years Ago

Oops..missed the review... Sorry.
Ohhhh.....GROSS. That was such a clear picture in my head. Like...snot just raining down on earth. Ugghghghghghghghgh...gotta get that picture out of my head or I'll never go out in the rain again. =D

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

steven

10 Years Ago

sort of, i dont really follow the comics anymore, i have a few x men books though, btw do you know t.. read more
closed

10 Years Ago

i think so
it gets really confusing though
steven

10 Years Ago

yeah MCU censors too, quicksilver and scarlet witch "love" eachother too much (incestual sort of) an.. read more
Very very true.... :P ....

Posted 11 Years Ago


iveltac

10 Years Ago

:p..............
Cool Girl

10 Years Ago

:p..................
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iveltac
iveltac

Middle Earth, KS



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im in my first year of highschool. Im 14 years old. I love to write and do cubees. My favorite music is Christian Contemp. Although i do like some linkin park. My favorite songs are Fighter by j.. more..