Love

What Is Love

Love is,

Sparkling like a shining stars,

Gloomy as a passing grey clouds,

Raining hardly with droplets of raindrops above,

and the sun rise brightly in the morning.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Simple, direct, lovely imagery.

I think your title more aptly should be "Love Is…" and that the poem should begin and end with the line "Love is… "

In the last line, did you mean "… sun [rising] brightly… " or, perhaps [shining]?

[Ivychelle]

thank you for the review momzillaNC :-) It should mean the sun rising brightly :-) thanks for the opinions~i am sure that i need to learn more in expressing feelings with nature

[MomzillaNC]

You express feelings beautiful. All else is finesse and that's a matter of your sensibility, not mine. I hope it was helpful. My views are only opinions; and you know what they say about opinions… :D

[Ivychelle]

yup,thank you for your time by reading my writing :-)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.