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A Poem by Danny Sanchez

The sound
Of your voice
Inebriates
My thoughts;
My heart;
And even my walk
... I had to check into rehab last night;
Detox was my last hope;
This love
Addiction
I can't cope
It's stronger than;
Man's greed for wealth
A daily struggle
But I'd do it all over again
Just to hear
That unconvincing,
Raspy;
Yet strong voice
Whisper "I love you"
Such a sweet and beautiful noise

© 2013 Danny Sanchez

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Annette Pisano-Higley

Check into a Love Rehab! I feel the pain here. Great metaphor. Love the originality, rhythm and flow. Brava!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Danny Sanchez

Baltimore, MD

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"Most people would learn from their mistakes if they weren't so busy denying them" I am here to learn and grow as a writer. Please review my work with honesty and wisdom. Thank you! more..