Fun Love
A Poem by Bela
You’re probably right
I’m just not ready,
But i do believe
I could love more
Than love I have for you.
Its too painful to stay
Just to live in the grey,
Neither here or there.
Our fun love
Is not enough,
For I want to
Throw myself all in
And never have to leave.
© 2013 Bela
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Very nice use of words.
"Just to live in the grey,
Neither here or there."
The grey area of love. A tempting and dangerous place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on September 12, 2013
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BelaSydney, New South Wales, Australia
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Been writing poems on and off since I was 11 or 12. Dabbling a bit, many should never see the light of day, but in the past couple of years my poems are a little better.
99% of the time I do not feel.. more..
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