Drink deep from the bottle

Drink deep from the bottle,

I’ll lose myself in your fantasy.

My drunken sprawl falls onto you.

This sweet dream cracks at the edge,

I think we both looked good once,

But we’ve blurred into reality.

 

I think I’ll be going.

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy]

I enjoy your short and sometimes, not so sweet deliveries JF! Sign of a good writer, to be sure. Those two final lines in the second stanza are beautiful!lol

Smiling at you

Tai

[Samuel Dickens]

Somehow I think there might be more to this than just a case of "beer goggles," but I could be wrong. The "I think I'll be going" seems significant.