Arien Ecplise

One of the most technical of my writings yet

Astronomical phenomonon

Ever so elegant radiate upon

as untainted souls survey up to find

The violet eye of inumbrate skies

 

Warping the nether,

subjacent stars cry

and tarnish to mere nothing

Where shade is but light

 

monochrome spectrum

serve and subsist by

illuminating the carnage

frontlines of world war i

 

Beautiful essence, yourself

I entreat you veer a typhlotic eye

to the abhorrence and antipithy

You must pledge upon tonight

 

 

 

Author's Note

For my aunt. I created something new; An Arien Eclipse. A moon of monochrome purple.

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I'm always entranced by the beautiful cultivation of language seeded by intellect that also comprehends the emotional nuances of aspects without having to state them outright but instead hinges them on the frame of creative word placement and usage~ you've woven a lovely celestial tapestry with heart~

[Maggie]

I love it and the new energy that suppose to come with it!!! love it!

[She comes, when I call ..]

Thanks for the review!

[Honourfish]

This poem is truly spectacular! the vivid colour makes it magical as does phrases such as 'warping the nether' great read!