Goodbye.

a short one :)

The sweet cold embrace of the razor's kiss

Is a feeling of happiness he will never miss

The angels in heaven are screaming his name

As souls of the dead writher in pain.

Reviews

[AngelEyes15]

Beautiful poem , written great I love it

[Jamie]

Thank you! I always appreciate your feedback :)

[Layi Tate]

Tragic but beautiful... sad that he felt the only way to find happiness was to slice his life away but I'm guessing it was wrist but that's just where my mind went .

Keep writing ...

[Jamie]

Yeah it was this one was quite rushed lol

[Layi Tate]

I don't care I love it I enjoy pieces that I can relate to on a spiritual level ....
Keep going and be sure to send me read requests I look forward to them ;)

[Jamie]

Thank you :) I will :)

[Layi Tate]

Thanks... :)

[misha]

Such beautiful melancholic simplicity. Great job, yet again!!!

[Jamie]

You are too kind :) Thank you so much :)

[misha]

you are welcome =)

[Eleanor]

This is short but has so much depth into it. Your words are really powerful.
Even your flow and rhyming are great. Would love to read more by you :)
Keep writing!

[Jamie]

Thank you! I will be adding more soon :)

[Meant_to_be]

Even though it's short it is very deep and can get a feeling out of it

[Jamie]

Thank you :)

[Maglia Weaver Twill]

I don't know what a "razor's kiss" is necessarily, but it sounds poetic and I like it,
I like "The angels in heaven are screaming his name/as souls of the dead writher in pain." It sounds very cheery even with all the mortality mess

[Jamie]

Thank you :)

[Awfulhabits]

This is AMAZING!! so short but so POWERFUL!!!!!

[Jamie]

Thank you :)

[Matching Socks]

If I interpret this correctly then it's quite sad.
Short... But impactful.

[Luna Zerimar]

Love.

"The sweet cold embrace of the razor's kiss is a feeling....he will never miss."

Loved those lines. The imagery is profound.

[Jamie]

Thank you :)