This Man

A poem of injustice.

This life has been taken,

Through prejudice and strife,

This man long forgotten,

So his children and his wife.

 

These whips tear his skin,

But never his soul,

The overseers seek justice,

Yet this man has always been whole.

 

This man wears black,

Yet his soul bleeds anger and fright,

Curse him as they do,

They both dread the night.

Author's Note

Any and all feedback welcome!

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

A man with a strong will is difficult to break, I think it's why they are often viewed as a threat when the ur opinions and beliefs are unpopular with government or religion.
They have the power to sway people's beliefs and so are a threat.
Good poem.

[Elisa]

I am continually impressed by your work. I especially like the last line. It was like "boom"! I think art and discussion will pave the way for racial reconciliation. Great job!

[Jamie]

Thank you so much Elisa! I agree! :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a great poem. It was powerful as well. I could feel every single emotion. That is what I like to read when I read a poem. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Jamie]

Thank you very much :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You are welcome :)

[Skai Rain]

This is so strong and emotional. I can feel the pain reading it. Bravo.

[Jamie]

Thank you Brit :)

[AngelEyes15]

Wow this poem has alot of emotion it made my heart sink reading it , i felt as if i saw out the eyes of the person you describe . Great poem.

[Jamie]

Thank you :) This was a hard write but I am happy with it :)

[Lizardo]

I really like it and specially the las stanza
Fine piece of work !