Empty

 

Its been months, and I still wanna cry,
I told you I hated you but I still wanna try

the fact is this its my heart you stole,
and I still blame you, because im not whole.

Sometimes I feel helpless, all sad and alone
and the other times, im surprised
at how much I've grown

I still want you, ever after all I said,
Because sometimes without you,
I'd rather be dead.

Reviews

[Michael Kerr]

hey Jami. you kinda surprised me at how much you have already written. i liked how you put that all together. it was brilliant. the rhyme, the flow, the message. all very well laid out. i can relate to your pain and how it feels. but you will heal. that i am sure. I've been in your shoes and i walked that mile. i remember all the crying i did, all the pain i felt, because without this person everything thing i would do would be for nothing. it will get better. great work. and welcome to the writerscafe. I'm glad to see your writing.

michael kerr