Away

The pains of separation

I woke this morning

My heartbeat was faint

It was louder

When you where there

By my side

Sharing the morning rays

Of illumination

Yet it was louder than yesterday

Moreover, I know tomorrow

It will be louder

Until you hear

From your distance

That it is the loudest

It has ever been

Hurry home

I love you

 

 

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Away

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This melted my heart..........

[paparapapa]

Aaaw. This is really sweet. I loved how you used the volume of the heartbeat to show that the time when the person that you love comes back is fast approaching. Great stuff! It flowed flawlessly.

[Susanna F]

This is so touching and sweet. Very well expressed.