One Hears

Inexperience lost to ripeness,

 

Unpolished was her pitch
An alphabet of sorrow so rich
And thru her throat
She carried the note
Scraped, fat and breaking apart
Where the lamentations from her heart
As they landed, silence fell
Then her pride, began to swell

 

 

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One Hears

Author's Note

The challenge was to use all ten words listed below in a poem, using no more than 40 words, including these ten,

Pitch, Throat, Scraped, Landed, Lamentations, Breaking, Fat, Sorrow, Unpolished, Alphabet,

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This very good! You did a great job with the Challenge... I applaud you! Bravo!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Sounds like a description of blues singer. Well done! I love the descriptions!

[AJ]

*happy sigh* Taking the confines of challenge rules and creating something gorgeous with it. Be proud, sir, this is lovely. :D

[stars are far]

This was so nice