coasting

coasting

A Poem by jarjarjar

just this time
let's try coasting
into this moment
let's just focus
less on ebb
more on flow

and its shore
and its shore
will be thankful

its sands will greet us
in gentle kisses
so that we know

© 2012 jarjarjar


Author's Note

jarjarjar
constructive criticism, please. :)

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Added on October 22, 2012
Last Updated on October 23, 2012

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jarjarjar
jarjarjar

United Kingdom



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