cry for help

Im all alone
i dont need a hand
im sitting here
no one understands
when i finnally leave my pain
someone shoves me down again

so ill stay here
lost in my dark world
wraped in my own fear
to let myself finally go
please set me free
to stop my misery

i wish that i
could just go numb
take away the pain
let it all be done
because i cannot save myself
and i cant let anyone else

no one knows
how i feel inside
no one knows
that i run and cry
maybee i should let them see
the pain i feel inside of me

trapped here
used to my crys
this is my fear
i cant do this myself

no place to hide.
this is my endless cry for help

Reviews

[Michael V]

You had me clapping saying Yay!!! On the part,
"no one knows
how i feel inside
no one knows
that i run and cry
maybee i should let them see
the pain i feel inside of me"

Urgh!!! Brilliant, very deep and dug down into ones inner feelings.....
Bravo Bravo :::Golf Clap::: Bravo!!!

[Baby Boy]

Wow! I know that this poem can speak for alot of people in this world and I am one of em! This was an awesome write gurl and the rhyming and the title for this peom is perfect! I really liked it and every verse was breathtaking! :) Great job Miss Jazmyne! Keep up the good work! I shall be reading more! :) One luv gurl!


-JC-

[Morgan A Lynch]

Jas.. wow. i have always loved your writings but this one just got to me. i know how you feel. you did so wondiful displaying this to me and i felt it in my heart.

[Michael V]

Once again it's like i know you...LoL
Good Job!

[Anthony J. M. Nelson]

Very heartfelt and penetrating. Your rhyme sequence was great and allowed for awesome visualizations. Only bad thing I have to say about this one Jas is run it thru a spell check (unless ofcourse the typeos are intentional).