Vornado

Created this one in minutes, after witnessing a squall. Words tripped off the tip of my brain, with relative ease this afternoon.

Swirling, dancing, blustery vortex,

stripping the wood with your dizzying efficiency.

Cold wind, recind your violence,

giving me the allowance of peaceful travels.

I want not much; 

Just the benevolence of sunnier days.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Good observation and good description of this phenomenon...Bravo..................

[Jay Steitler]

Thanks Sami! Had a front row seat to the excitement, from my kitchen table!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)...................

[m.s.early]

Distinctively resentful of nature's violence, yet done tactfully with good form and excellent imagery.

[Jay Steitler]

The imagery's the thing. Thanks for your review!