Heavenly Angel

This is my Urenga Parameter for the Albert's Poetry Cafe-Fun with Form Contest.

Heavenly mother,

you are my sunshine, my reason to live.

You showed so much love.

You have found your place inside of my heart,

I love you so much.

 

You showed so much love.

You have found your place inside of my heart,

I love you so much.

You taught me to love,

you will always live in my heart.

 

You taught me to love,

you will always live in my heart.

You are my angels.

You gave me my very first home,

when you two came down from Heaven.

Reviews

[Bryan_Himmel]

I really enjoyed the format, the simplicity and shortness that delivered a powerful loving message of adoration.

[Darksummerswind]

I like the rythme and theme that you use, but I couldn't find myself getting into the poem. Still it's a good piece.

[lily platycorn]

This is beautiful and very touching.

[Rakerman1]

A noble dedication and interesting format.
Well done
Raker

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like it a very good poem
Great Job

[Gandré]

such a wonderful poem, made my day.

[angelina neves]

lovely dedication to motheres!

[Poeticpiers]

enjoyed the read you declare your faith openly

[Shelby Baker]

Nice EXPECT i personally feel its not finished but ya. that's only me and this is your writing so ya.
its very nice.
love the flow
love the words
simply nice