Safety

A Poem by jayfray

More break up poetry

Safety

I felt safe in your arms...

They felt so good around me...

You were this wall that protected me from the world

You were wide shouldered

and strong

and true

I guess you weren't completely true

In fact you were a lie

False security is never a good thing

© 2011 jayfray

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*~DreamDeamon~*

you seem to have a reoccuring theme here. sadness.. its very interesting. good write

Posted 14 Years Ago

Roger Morrison

Very saddening, taps deeply into the emotion without overstating anything. Great diction in the end. Great work.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on February 22, 2011
Last Updated on February 22, 2011

Author

jayfray

Potsdam, NY

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I'm 18. I study english education and theatre and Potsdam. I mainly write poems, scripts, and i dabble in novels, but I lack the inspiration and motivation to actually finish any i attempt to write. I.. more..