CONSCRIPTION

concrete poem

CONSCRIPTION

mans........laughter
mans.......laughter
mans......laughter
mans.....laughter
mans....laughter
mans...laughter
mans..laughter
mans.laughter
MANSLAUGHTER

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. In the mist of war. There must be laughter. Men must know hope. Joke and conversation is needed. Not about death. About life. The good words led me to thoughts. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[jeannemarie coulter]

the victor v for death and manslaughter in war

[....................]

great thought-provoking, concrete poem, Jeannemarie

[jeannemarie coulter]

to play with language...what fun...thank you

[dan]

Nice, especially with that title attached. Great graphic and a splendid idea. My compliments. take care...dan

[Perkele.7885]

Tells me to get out of the conscripted service before the ninth year.

[jeannemarie coulter]

yes, dosen't it...the fact that the two words melded into one and all the possible relationships between them has always fascinated me...

[wordman]

over my ignorant head ,like the photo

[jeannemarie coulter]

i found the relationship between the three words interesting...the pointless waste of human life in some conscripted cases...

[wordman]

greed,power and money

[jeannemarie coulter]

yes, i keep trying to forget about the money...unfortunately it drives our cultures...

[wordman]

and always will ,until the end of time