A BLUES NOTE

A BLUES NOTE
blue lace petals,
notes born
in my garden
singing the blues
to butterflies
choreographing
the dance of hummingbirds
from bud to bloom
in a smiling
dew dripped dawn...

Reviews

[Isabel25]

Blue is my favourite colour and the mood I am in mostly...i feel it is one of the colours that can depict happiness and sadness at the same time. Beautiful use of imagery in this piece- blue lace petals singing the blues to the butterflies- that's a really beautiful picture :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you gentle lady or the kind words...jc

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you and blessed be to thee...

[Relic]

~A beautiful comparison.~

[Marie]

How enchanting. I have never seen blue roses; in fact, I don't think I ever saw a picture of them before.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Your poem is like a magical piece of nature's wonders.

[Valentine]

Sweet write, love to see those little birds drinking from our feeders. Valentine

[wordman]

a beautiful write,a beautiful flower on a sad note

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you for reading and responding...jc

[wordman]

you are welcome