FIRST RIGHT

a senryu to share laughter with you...

FIRST RIGHT
first parental right
is playing tiddly winks with
the minds of their young...

Author's Note

am i playing tiddly winks with you, as i have done with the offspring of my family???

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I liked this positive write and thought. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

[....................]

another fun read, Jeannemarie, from the catalogue of your wonderful work... I've never played tiddly-winks but it sure sounds like fun... I'm with Raj: when is it my turn?

[jeannemarie coulter]

my mom used to put food coloring in our oatmeal and tell us it was medicine and we had to eat it no matter what it tasted like...tiddly winks with our minds...

[Perkele.7885]

You may well be dear girl! I know that my own mother certainly never had the time. When is it my turn?

[Marie]

I do remember how to play tiddlywinks...answering children's uestions is like that game...

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you...

[dan]

I forget how that is played, but I don't think it matters because of my giggling at the senryu. Thank you for that! take care...dan

[jeannemarie coulter]

isn't it wonderful how laughter heals...thank you

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Definitely brought a smile out:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you and blessings returned

[wordman]

but sometimes it back fires you know
loved it and the image

[jeannemarie coulter]

yes it dose sometimes bite me in the buns...lol

[wordman]

see there you go with those words again,thats what got your niece in trouble all ready