OF BLUE HOUR

OF BLUE HOUR

the coming of the blue hour,
arrives peacefully so serene and semi-silent...
sipped silently from this private tower,
the coming of the blue hour
folding open like a flower,
easing in with ra's decent...
the coming of the blue hour,
arrives peacefully serene and semi-silent...

Reviews

[Amber Lily]

Yet another beautiful setting you have painted for me. I like how you referred to the sun as ra, the Egyptian sun god. A cool way to mix up the vocab :)

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love all things Egyptian so really enjoyed the reference to Ra... your words are as peaceful and serene as the picture you have included... beautiful...

[jeannemarie coulter]

i lived near this beach and enjoyed it often on horseback or foot, thank you

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it is gorgeous... I live near salt water and while the beaches are not sandy the sunrise, sunset and the hum of the sea is breathtaking

[jeannemarie coulter]

sunsets over the pacific are often spectacular...

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yes, like sunrises over the atlantic :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and description. Made me wish for a blue hour. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[dan]

The depth and breadth of this write is stunning. The 'blue hour' theme is perfectly matched with the picture, creating a multi-media effect of epic proportions. My compliments! take care...dan

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you, dan, the blue hour is one of my favorite parts of the day...

[wordman]

the image says it all,breath taking

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you...i really love this part of the day

[wordman]

i could look at this for hours

[Sami Khalil]

Those semi's can become full if enjoyed to the fullest. Lovely to visit and enjoy.

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you for reading my offerings

[Sami Khalil]

Any time. You are welcome.

[Perkele.7885]

Sounds like an hour that exists with me in mind!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very calming feeling from this...i like the flow...and the rhyme scheme adds to the effect of the imagery.

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Now that's and hour worth living
beautiful wording to match the image
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!