MEMORY

MEMORY

the dawn mist rises
from the quiet water face,
vanishing with

the sun’s first soft kiss,

memories

do not drift so easily...

Reviews

[Isabel25]

You are a nature's poet aren't you? And you do it brilliantly too..
I agree, memories definitely don't drift away that easily, but i feel that some memories deserve to stick on, for whatever reason they do so- it could be a good one or a bad one..i mean if we forget easily then life would become meaningless and we would keep repeating our mistakes and forgetting faces..

[jeannemarie coulter]

your words ring with truth...thank you...

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thank god they don't... my favorite time of the day is when the sun begins to burn the mist from a pond or late... another calm and peaceful image you paint with your words...

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you for understanding

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happy you shared this... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The value of memory. Under-rated. My dear Grandfather told me often. Grandson, you saw the world and did many things. You will have good things to hold on to in old age. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[dan]

It always amazes me when a short piece can speak such large volumes. My writing is way too wordy to match anything like this. Props to one who can write pieces like this with grace and beauty. take care...dan

[jeannemarie coulter]

"i just got a few years on you,..."from a song by dr hook

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a reflection...nature's new day...the spirit lightened by the soft kiss...memories good or bad do not drift easily, but are buffered by the softness of the new day....and/or a significant other who is like the sun to us.

[Perkele.7885]

Memories, both the ones we desire to remember and the ones that we desire to forget are processed in the same manner. some we most just pigeon hole away out of main stream thought to get them out of the way.
This is what I do and it has worked for me quite well as I do not forget things very well.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A soft and alluring vision you have painted.

[wordman]

memories,they linger in your mind
and i hope from good times;a great write

[jeannemarie coulter]

my thanks are unbound...blessings to thee...

[wordman]

thank you.need all i can get

[Sami Khalil]

Soothing imagery and one which makes us drift to enjoy those mornings.

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you...i enjoy these moments as well

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome.

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
beautiful wording to mirror image:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!