OTHERWORLD FANTASIA

from one of my otherworlds feel free to taste the fantasy

OTHERWORLD FANTASIA
O opalescent translucent mists of otherwhere
T time shifting to weave carefully
H hidden hallways from human to fairyworld,
E exquisitely alive with
R resilient vibrant colors
W washing shimmering fairy laughter
O over our shivering souls
R reaching with enchanted
L longing into transcending
D dreamy fairyland meadows

F flower formed castles,
A ancient yet ageless drifting
N narcotic of lavender and rose
T tingle trip flowing through
A arteries in mindrooms and
S sanctuaries for beings seeking
I iridescent dreamscape dancing
A among fairies and elves enchanting...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. I liked hoe you create places and good visions of a magical place. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Amber Lily]

I love you fantasy poems, it makes me just want to live in the place that you describe. It's like each color creates a whole new type of happiness and wonder. I'd explore every inch of a place like this if I could. Fantastic work here :)

[Matt Hope]

Creative with a really nice flow. Applause :)

[Robert]

So creative jeannemarie. I see the the poem reads as the title from the first letter down through the poem. Very clever and imaginative.

[Maja]

For some reason, it made me feel like I was enveloped in a cloud of pink. Your words have the power to make me taste cotton candy in the middle of my reading. And I love cotton candy.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Very creative acrostic! I love it!
A magical spell binds your words together weaving charm and elegance through this poetic journey.

[jeannemarie coulter]

thank you, it was a challenge to write but i enjoyed doing it...

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Great job. :)
You're welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

god, i'm back in the sixties!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what a trip....i have to "call alice, i think she'll know"

[jeannemarie coulter]

ask alice, she will know...lol...thank you, jacob, i enjoyed the writing of it...