WHAT CREATURE AM I

WHAT CREATURE AM I

what creature am i?
the sun rattles through my eyelids
like the wind through venetion blinds
and i wake up thinking of YOU...
i stretch from my nightgown rags of nothing
LAUGHING...
what creature am i...

what creature am i?
walking your wet cobbled pavement
dressed in shadow ribbons,
i live in the rain
where the pavement shines
before my streetlamp eyes
and i hear YOU smile,
afraid
when i approach,
speaking
what creature am i...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"i hear you smile" like that...

i hear the wind, and am adjusting the blinds, looking outside for this creature...you make it so real.