FIRST FALL RAIN

FIRST FALL RAIN

barefoot walking
warm water droplets
tickle my toes from above
as the wet grass and autumn leaves tickle below
stirring sweet fresh giggles to
bound out of my soul
and waltz with raindrops
through my garden...

Reviews

[Art Sun]

nicely written thoughts, the rain and grounding yourself to Earth.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The FIRST FALL RAIN is always special for each of us. Your poem is extremely beautiful with an amazing picture at the start. Definitely you brought back some rainy thoughts. Thanks for sharing such a great piece of art :)

[Insight "MH"]

You gave a pleasure to all senses. Thank you for sharing.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Playful with colors of the rainbow.
a fresh outlook with feeling.

[daninstockholm]

fun!! Many morning spent with just such a walk,, Lovely photo as well!

[JayceeC]

I have missed the bubbling joy that you find in the smallest things. Hope you are well. Jan

[Adam Adams]

It's always fascinating to get wet - so drained under the pleasure of cold rain ... that speaks many hearts in few droplets... very intriguing & simplistically beautiful poetry you're bled in. Nice flow of ink.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A lovely little poem... I don't know what I love more, the sound of rain or the smell when it stops.
Enjoy this greatly.

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully captured image in words, of finding beauty from within that which brings so many annoyance.

[Coyote Poetry]

A barefoot walk in the Fall. Would be a nice place to be. I do like early Fall. Pleasure weather and slower days. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote