Lasting only for a Time

What I see in the Autumn Leaves

Lasting only for a Time

 

Crimson Wonder

Visual Thunder

Loiter then Wander

Stop and Ponder

Autumn Temple’s

Temporal Foment

Fallen Asunder

Now it’s Gone

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

The thing I love about autumn is that it doesn't fizzle away silently... There is a last shout of beauty, a magnificent color burst ending the season. Although it does end, beauty dies... One can only hope to die so brilliantly. Wonderful poem. I loved it.

[JD Jessop]

Thank you for your amazing review! there is poetic prose in your words here - "last shout of beauty", "One can only hope to die so brilliantly"..................you are an amazing writer even when you are reviewing Kalypso............keep writing! and thanks again for reading mine.

[Matching Socks]

Beauty never lasts...

Lovely poem JD

[JD Jessop]

Thanks Ana ;)

[Marie]

Autumn's treasure is an illusion. It turns to nothingness, even as we look...

[JD Jessop]

I like how you describe it Marie