Determined

Time to get off your sorry butts and get motivated.

We wish,

That's humanity but

We tend still to call ourselves

Pieces of effing s**t.

(Why wish when wishes mean practically nothing?)

And I, I, I

Wanna know

What's going on

And I, I, I,

Wanna know

Where are we 

Going wrong?

And I, I, I

Wanna fix this.

We dream

Inevitably but

Still we tend to be

Incredibly mean.

(Why do we need this?)

And I, I, I

Wanna know

What's going on

And I, I, I,

Wanna know

Where are we 

Going wrong?

And I, I, I

Wanna fix this.

We rise

Together but

We fall and tend to

Meet social demise

(Even in poetry)

And I, I, I

Wanna know

What's going on

And I, I, I,

Wanna know

Where are we 

Going wrong?

And I, I, I

Wanna fix this.

We hope

That things will get better but

What do we do

Other than sit around and wait for it to?

(You won't get anywhere sitting on that a*s of yours)

And I, I, I

Wanna know

What's going on

And I, I, I,

Wanna know

Where are we 

Going wrong?

And I, I, I

Wanna fix this.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

acoustic guitar and a joni mitchell type voice would do wonders for this. i can hear it in my heart. i really like it....well done!

[Riley Bray]

All these comments wanting me to sing it, sheesh! I guess now I'll have to. x_x Thanks for the review.

[quinfinn]

oh, i look forward to it!

[Riley Bray]

Haha, that makes one of us. xP

[SarahV]

Love this! Bet it will sound amazing with a soft voice and an acoustic guitar! Love the motivation in this! :)

[Riley Bray]

That's precisely how I sing it! Same wave-length. ;)

[SarahV]

Hahaha yeah!! You should totally put a video underneath it with you singing :3

[Riley Bray]

Haha I will if I ever make one, I'm pretty shy about my voice. :P

[SarahV]

Awhh I'm sure it will be great, let me know if you do ! :)

[Riley Bray]

Can do. ;)

[Jeremia]

I'm assuming this is one of your songs. I like it. It would be nice to hear it sung tho. I tend to read things differently than most.

[Riley Bray]

Yeah, its a song alright. I would sing it but lately my voice has been scratchy, (getting rid of a cold), and I don't have an all that good microphone anyway, (not to mention that it saves me the embarrassment), but you know, maybe someday I will. :)

[Jeremia]

Haha, you know. Phones have pretty decent mics. lol

[Riley Bray]

Well, there's always the embarrassment I can use as an excuse. :P

[Jeremia]

Pssh, nothing to be embarrassed about.

[Riley Bray]

Easy for you to say haha.

[Jeremia]

Yes it is. But seriously, you have nothing to worry about or be embarrassed about.

[Dafina]

Loved it!!

[Riley Bray]

Thanks. :)

[Just Kim]

excellent set of lyrics, awesome write!

[Riley Bray]

Thank you!